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Practicing dynamic art again, trying to get more action poses down not really very good but working on it
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 it looks awsome >3< epic pose
-- Bearer of Rainbowsheep Of Doom ~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~  This is awesome, only advice I could give would be that his right arm should be a little higher with his hand above the leg, it looks just a little bit awkward hidden behind his thigh.
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-- Bearer of Rainbowsheep Of Doom ~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~ Then those people are idiots. If you don't want a critique then don't ask for me, I very, very much apperciate them milady. Never be afraid to be completely brutal with me
 -- I'm a slave and I am a master. Alright I'll keep that in mind!
-- And if we can't protect the weak How can we call ourselves strong Is the assurance that they seek So beyond us all -Stiff Little Fingers  I love it
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I think this is very good. And I am sure it will look good when you color it. The head area seems a tad big, not much. Also the Torso does seem a bit short, but without color, I can't tell if he is kind of bending forward. I draw a person as if they have no clothes on to get the structure better before putting in the detail of clothing. Other than that, this is really good and I can't wait for you to color it! Good luck!
hope this helps, love!
Angel
Sorry that it shall suck >3>
I think that the initial layout of the pose is pretty good. The torso is pretty good, but seems slightly big to me. -I'm not the greatest with torso's so I may be off-
The head is good. I like it.
To me, the left arm seems a little too short to me. Maybe try making the distance between the shoulder to the elbow longer and then the elbow to the wrist longer as well. The right arms good, the only thing is maybe we should see the hand just under the leg?
The legs look pretty good aside that they seem slightly too short. The right leg seems to be too short for the body. This area I may be really off in because I have horrible proporitions on limbs myself >3>
Well I hope my critque helped.
Overall it does look really good >3<
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